The Elenium


It’s always a little scary to read books that I loved when I was younger since my tastes now are so different. That said, even though I never liked The Elenium as much as The Belgariad: Volume One, I sure did like it a lot when it first came out. So when I saw it at my local Barnes and Noble, I thought I’d give it a try.

Wish I hadn’t.
It’s not terrible, but it’s really nothing more than a travelogue with characters having witty banter as they kill people or threaten to kill people. The characters themselves were amusing enough, archetypal all, but with little growth or character development beyond their archetypal nature. I will say sometimes The Elenium was laugh out loud funny, which is an attribute missing from many epic fantasies being written today. The series had a lightness of tone that sometimes redeemed the otherwise interminable traveling.
Nonetheless, all the clever characters, witty banter, and humor just weren’t enough. It was a dull read despite the new episode of action or intrigue seeming to occur every twenty to fifty pages. There just wasn’t any sense of danger or challenge. I was also depressed by the underlying racism of the world Edding’s created – such as such race is known for their stupidity, religious zealotry, etc – wore thin the first two times I read about them. I don’t remember it from my first time with the series, but there it was like a giant slug on a cake.

Facebook advertising

As an experiment, I advertised on Facebook between 2/22/2014-2/24/2014 to see if I could increase sales of A Warrior’s Path. My dollar limit was set pretty high at $25/day for the first two days and $15 for the third day. I targeted the ad to include people from the US, Canada, UK, Australia, and India who were interested in popular fantasy/sci-fi authors like Robert Jordan, Anne McCaffrey, Mercedes Lackey, and Brandon Sanderson as well as Game of Thrones and ebooks. Overall, the target audience was listed at 42 million. Pretty big I thought.

Also, I made sure the ad linked directly to the Amazon page for A Warrior’s Path

When I first started the ad, it was included in my timeline as well as a right-hand ad. At first, almost everything I got was a click to the timeline ad, and people didn’t go on to the Amazon page. So the ad increased awareness, and I even got some more ‘Likes’ for the FB page, but I don’t know if it did anything for sales.

The next day, I deleted the inclusion of the ad as part of my timeline and left it solely as a right-hand ad. I can’t say I noticed much of a change even then in terms of sales.

At that point, S.G. Night, author of Attrition: The First Act of Penance (btw Sam is only 18, but my goodness, his writing is so much more mature. He has a wonderful future ahead of him and his future might be now) suggested some changes I make to the ad. Sam has had success advertising on FB, and he had some good advice on changes I should make to my target audience.

Thus, further changes to my ad campaign were made on 2/24/2014 to be implemented on 2/25/2014. I got rid of Game of Thrones and readers of ebook , and went with George RR Martin and many, many more authors, such as Janny Wurts , Stephen R. Donaldson, and Jennifer Roberson. My audience went from 42 million to 2 million. That’s also when I dropped the daily total I was willing to pay to $15, but kept the max bid for an ad at $0.60/click – I ended up paying $0.24/click for the entirety of the campaign.

So. Did advertising work?

I’m not sure. My sales were at their peak about two weeks ago, and since then have steadily trended downward, although they’re still healthy. Nevertheless, I wanted to see if I could halt the decline. On 2/22/2014-2/23/2014, my sales were about the same as they have been over the past week, or possibly even a little lower, but on 2/24/2014, I had a slight bump in sales. I’m not sure what to make of such short trends and small data points.

Also, one rather large caveat is that I had a Goodreads giveaway that just ended on 2/25/2014, so that obviously factors into things.

The bottom line is that I think I need a lot more data points and trends to see if the FB ad can or has helped, but I’m going to keep plugging away, and I’ll keep on posting about my results.


An experiment

Over on my Facebook page, I’m running an ad to see if I can drum up sales for A Warrior’s Path.

As a self-published author, I kinda have to worry about silly things like marketing since there isn’t anyone else to do it. More importantly, I’m following along the paths laid down by Michael Sullivan, Joe Konrath, Lindsay Buroker, and many other authors who have shared their own experiences on how they built their readerships. It’s all part of giving back.

The Facebook ad is an experiment, and once I have the details on how much it finally costs and how many sales (if any) it generated, I’ll let everyone know.

Slow burn success

A post from the wonderful Janny Wurts about the history of sales in fantasy and expectations of success. A useful reminder in today’s world, which seems to be all about instant gratification.

The Unrecognized Trajectory of Slow Burn Success by Janny Wurts

BTW if you haven’t read Janny’s Empire series with Raymond Feist, you’re missing out on a great trilogy. Sadly, it’s not yet in ebook format. 



The title of the post is lifted from my youngest son. He’ll get a thought in his little noggin and say something like, “It wonders me why the sky is blue?”

Love that phrasing.

I’m still stuck in the Purgatory of studying for my Boards, but there is a small ray of hope. While I don’t want to write new material-I shudder to think what I might write in my current state-I do think I can edit some of the 90,000 words of book 2 that I’ve written so far.

Next item of business: song lists. A lot of authors let readers know what they listen to when they write, so I thought what the heck. I’ll do the same. I like a lot of things, but when I’m writing battles, I gravitate toward this kind of music

Clutch-The Regulator

Heard it first on The Walking Dead.


Inside Out & Back Again


My wife suggested I give this sweet, lovely book a try. It’s different from anything that I usually read since it is essentially a story written in blank verse. I read it over a period of a week – five minutes here, 10 minutes there.

The book is an quick, easy read, but by easy I don’t mean simple. It was a poignant, bittersweet walk down memory lane, especially for those of us who are immigrants to America. So many of Ha’s experiences and impressions resonated with those from my own childhood. The simultaneous alienation and hopeful desire to be a part of America – all of it  struck a chord.

The writing is crisp-no wasted words-and with a few pithy sentences Lai was able to create a multitude of characters and breathe life into them; everyone from the cowboy to Missss Wasshington. It’s a lesson for all of us who write.

If I have a criticism it’s that the story  ended too quickly. I want to know what else happens to Ha and her family. Hopefully, the author will let us know in later volumes.



Winters in NC tend to be short and mild, and this year was no exception. We got a few cold spells and some snow, but overall, it’s been pretty nice. It’s certainly a lot better than where I grew up in Cincinnati, OH, where they’ve been stuck in some polar vortex for the past month with a snowstorm every week. That’s bad enough, but what I always hated about winters in the Midwest was the clouds. It seemed like from November to April, the skies were an unrelenting, dismal gray.

In NC, our winters tend to be sunny, and we usually get a break from the cold every few weeks with temperatures in the 50s (that’s in the 10s for those who use Celsius). It makes winters far more tolerable and not so depressing.

All that said, I’m looking forward to leaves on the trees.

1000 Sales!

Sometime yesterday, the 1000th copy of A Warrior’s Path was purchased. A HUGE thank you to everyone who’s taken a chance on a no-name, first time author and bought my book!

For me, one thousand sales represents something more than just a number. It’s a North Star. It’s more a goal and a guide. It means that something  I’ve written has gone out into the world and is resonating. It’s a surreal feeling.

Again, thank you to everyone who’s bought the book!